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兰若
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有时想跑地很远
象匹野马样地奔跑
打开门,风把我的骨头刺伤。

静静的,这城市
像一束彩色的
塑料花,永远盛开。

风一吹,城市,站在那里,
我听到雨声,象眼泪。


思无邪.


   
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(@灵沼)
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象匹野马样的奔跑,地?



   
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(@冷热)
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真是PF你们的想象,真棒!



   
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(@况也)
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"城市
像一束彩色的
塑料花"
很有意思



   
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兰若
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谢大家,灵沼以后帮我再看着点,我比较粗心。。。。:)


思无邪.


   
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永远盛开。的,都是假的。


欲说还休,欲说还休。不说也罢。


   
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