伊甸文苑 [原创]摘桃子 Page 2 / 2 Prev 1 2 诗苑 Last Post by 冬雪儿 17 years ago 16 Posts 6 Users 0 Reactions 1,811 Views RSS 冬雪儿 (@冬雪儿) Illustrious Member Guest Joined: 20 years ago Posts: 11540 Topic starter 18/12/2008 8:05 am Originally posted by [i]章凝[/i] at 2008-12-17 11:57 PM: 因为你这属於小“叙事诗”，类似“卖炭翁”那种，关键地方必须交代清楚，不能 让读者猜谜。如果像李商隐的“沧海月明珠有泪”，则不用说清楚。 谢章凝诚意的点拨和提醒!你在前几贴这样提醒、点拨一下，不是让我少走一些弯路吗.:( ReplyQuote Page 2 / 2 Prev 1 2
