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奔放年纪轻轻,经历却很丰富。



   
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营救

----后来人质被警察
营就出来,



   
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le? de?

----经历的漫长的严冬,春天更显得娇媚。



   
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病句?

----脸上总是充满了笑靥。



   
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才会过神来,??????



   
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我想看看有没有与人和租的可能。 ??????



   
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奔放写的很好啊。

让人能身临其境。

我现在就对纽约感兴趣。:lol:


因为无能为力,所以尽力而为。


   
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Originally posted by [i]wxll[/i] at 2006-10-17 12:29 PM:
我想看看有没有与人和租的可能。 ??????

谢谢先磨,帮我找了那么多"虫子".我已经改过来了.应该有中文软件,自动校正这些错误的.



   
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Originally posted by [i]weili[/i] at 2006-10-17 06:01 PM:
奔放写的很好啊。

让人能身临其境。

我现在就对纽约感兴趣。:lol:

谢谢为力.你大概早就对纽约感兴趣了吧,否则作品中怎么以纽约为背景呢?



   
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Originally posted by [i]benfangd[/i] at 2006-10-17 08:21 PM:

谢谢为力.你大概早就对纽约感兴趣了吧,否则作品中怎么以纽约为背景呢?

其实我喜欢大都市,但绝不想居住在那里,经常去参观访问很好的。

但现在大都市同化的很厉害,你不觉得吗?长的都快差不多了。:o

我也是没有办法,不写纽约,人们不关心别的地方啊。

等着继续看你的。


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benfangd

”小家家岁”这样的事,再多写点。:P

出车祸可真叫人害怕,我学生时出了一次事故后,到现在也不爱开车。:P


我在低处,只能和低下头来的人说话,,,


   
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Originally posted by [i]pugongying[/i] at 2006-10-18 04:53 AM:
benfangd

”小家家岁”这样的事,再多写点。:P

出车祸可真叫人害怕,我学生时出了一次事故后,到现在也不爱开车。:P

下次再补写一点"艳史":)

我刚开车的前几年出过六、七次车祸, 我也是怕开车,不过没有办法,我更不敢坐飞机.我有时候真想
做一个什么村的村民,足不出村.



   
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Originally posted by [i]weili[/i] at 2006-10-18 12:49 AM:

其实我喜欢大都市,但绝不想居住在那里,经常去参观访问很好的。

但现在大都市同化的很厉害,你不觉得吗?长的都快差不多了。:o
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所以住在市郊,commute到城市去上班就成了我的选择了.看来我们的价值观是一样的.



   
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