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徐英才五首关于“诗”的三行诗

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1. 心窝里酿的酒

不需鼎
装入爵
醇厚、回味,飘香悠远

The Wine Made in My Heart

Does not need a Ding cauldron
But a Jue cup to hold
In which its taste rich and lingering, aroma far-reaching

2. 我的诗

不需长江那么长
却象它那样深邃湍急
装着天空、高山、林莽......

My Poems

Do not need to be as long as the Yangtze River
But as deep and torrential
Filled with skies, mountains, forests…

3. 微诗

挥动心剑
截断冰川 推入大海
把生命的源藏在冰尖下

Micro-Poems

I swing the sword of heart
To truncate the glacier, which I push into the sea
To hide the source of life under the iceberg

4. 诗

心中涌出的云
向天际
飘去

Poems

Clouds rising from my heart
Drifting
to the horizon

5. 诗

一把测试
思维深度的

Poetry

Measurement
for
The depth of thought



   
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好诗!好诗!


因为我和黑夜结下了不解之缘 所以我爱太阳


   
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好诗!

鼎和爵有什么本质的区别?


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鼎:

[img] [/img]

爵:

[img] http://collection.sina.com.cn/wwzx/2016-04-21/doc-ifxrpvcy4266969.shtml [/img]



   
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都是 container,

鼎是用来做饭, 爵是用来装酒。

当然,

“不需鼎
装入爵”

若是

“不需爵
装入鼎”

娓娓道来。


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工欲行其事,比先利其器

1、食器炊煮类:鼎、鬲、甗、釜盛食类:簋、簠、敦、豆取食器:匕切案器:俎

2、酒器温酒器:爵、角、斝饮酒器:觚、觯、杯盛酒器:尊、卣、觥、瓿、方彝、罍、壶、缶挹酒器:斗(勺)承案器:禁

3、水器盛水器、注水器、盘、匜、盉、鉴、盂、浴缶

4、乐器钟、镈、铙、铃、铎、钲、句鑃、錞于、鼓

5、兵器镞、戈、矛、戟、钺、刀、剑、殳、铍、盔、弩机

6、工具手工工具:斧、锛、凿、刀、削、锯、锥、钻农具:镢、铲、臿、耨、镰、犁铧渔具:钓钩

7、车马器车器、马饰、御器:軎、辖、毂饰、轴饰、衡饰、軓饰、踵、軏、轭、銮、衔、镳、节约、当卢、马冠饰

8、度量衡器尺、量、权

9、杂器铜镜、钱币、玺印、符节、熨斗、熏炉、灯、笄、钗、环、戒、带钩、坠链、牌饰、雕塑

作者:攸声旅游
链接:[url] https://www.zhihu.com/question/48181839/answer/2130108407 [/url]
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Originally posted by [i]thesunlover[/i] at 2022-6-1 10:07 AM:
好诗!好诗!

不能上帖子!


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Originally posted by [i]小忍[/i] at 2022-6-11 10:41:

不能上帖子!

哈:)

接下来是不是要问:诗可能比长江那么长吗?
接下来或许还会责问贺知章:二月春风可能似剪刀吗?
接下来或许还会责问王之涣:黄河可能远上白云间吗?
接下来或许还会责问岳飞:怒发可能冲冠吗?
接下来或许还会责问李白:白发可能三千丈吗?
接下来或许还会责问李煜:愁可能有一江春水那么多吗?

如果改成:

不需大酒缸
装入爵
醇厚、回味,飘香悠远

听上去好像不对味。

所以,还得感谢文学的模糊性。

取“鼎”与“爵"是因为它们都是三条腿,以对应三行诗。



   
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Originally posted by [i]徐英才[/i] at 2022-6-11 15:58:

哈:)

接下来是不是要问:诗可能比长江那么长吗?
接下来或许还会责问贺知章:二月春风可能似剪刀吗?
接下来或许还会责问王之涣:黄河可能远上白云间吗?
接下来或许还会责问岳飞:怒发可能冲冠吗?
接下来或许还会责问李白:白发可能三千丈吗?
接下来或许还会责问李煜:愁可能有一江春水那么多吗?

如果改成:

不需大酒缸
装入爵
醇厚、回味,飘香悠远

听上去好像不对味。

所以,还得感谢文学的模糊..

我才体会到,你的意思是不用大的容器,用小的就可以了。

读懂诗歌很不容易呢。



   
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