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品竹叶青,个个三口嫌少

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饮茶和品酒,前一段有人谈了饮茶,很有雅兴。和朋友一起小酌,也很有诗意。喝竹叶青,得一上联:

品竹叶青,个个三口嫌少 😉


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Originally posted by [i]无言[/i] at 2006-12-13 02:43 AM:
饮茶和品酒,前一段有人谈了饮茶,很有雅兴。和朋友一起小酌,也很有诗意。喝竹叶青,得一上联:

品竹叶青,人人三口嫌少:wink:


游格陵蓝,处处一览过多:P
(Greenland 既然可以翻成格陵兰,自也可以翻成格陵蓝。极地冰原无啥可看,一览无余是也)



   
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Originally posted by [i]况也[/i] at 2006-12-13 12:20 AM:

游格陵蓝,处处一览过多:P
(Greenland 既然可以翻成格陵兰,自也可以翻成格陵蓝。极地冰原无啥可看,一览无余是也)

对不起,笔误。:frown:

应该是

品竹叶青,个个三口嫌少

拆品为三口,竹为个个。

不过,况也网友这个对子意境很好,无言喜欢。:cool:


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Originally posted by [i]无言[/i] at 2006-12-13 12:05 PM:

对不起,笔误。:frown:

应该是

品竹叶青,个个三口嫌少

拆品为三口,竹为个个。

😎


哈哈,原来还有如此机巧,妙,看来是绝对了。不要来编排我,快把你的下联拿出来让我们开开眼界



   
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Originally posted by [i]况也[/i] at 2006-12-13 09:48 PM:

哈哈,原来还有如此机巧,妙,看来是绝对了。不要来编排我,快把你的下联拿出来让我们开开眼界

下联暂时还没有,等各位来对。


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试一试:

品竹叶青,个个三口嫌少

会旧时人,人云一日不多



   
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Originally posted by [i]aeuglein[/i] at 2006-12-17 08:06 AM:
试一试:

品竹叶青,个个三口嫌少

会旧时人,人云一日不多


Good try!
如果上半句的人字和下半句的人字叠在一起就好了。;)


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Originally posted by [i]aeuglein[/i] at 2006-12-17 01:06 PM:
试一试:

品竹叶青,个个三口嫌少

会旧时人,人云一日不多


妙,竟然可以如此对,把第一个“人”改成“友”是否更好一点?



   
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况也、无言的意见好,我再来试一试:

品竹叶青,个个三口嫌少

忆从前事,人人心意良多



   
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Originally posted by [i]aeuglein[/i] at 2006-12-18 02:46 PM:
况也、无言的意见好,我再来试一试:

品竹叶青,个个三口嫌少

忆从前事,人人心意良多


Much better!:lol:


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