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冰花
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夏天

冰花

夏天
象一只鸟儿
飞走

我 无法挽留
只好微笑着
望着鸟儿飞走

再也看不见鸟儿啦
回首 把夏日的温度
刻在记忆的里头

夏天
象一只鸟儿
飞走-----

11/04/06

挽留夏天

原稿:

冰花

夏天
象一只鸟儿
飞走
我无法挽留

不管我
眼里流出多少眷恋
心头飘过多少忧愁

夏天
我无法挽留
只好微笑着
望着鸟儿飞走

再也看不见鸟儿啦
回首
把夏日的温度
刻在记忆的里头

夏天
象一只鸟儿
飞走
我无法挽留

11/04/06


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头像是谁,那么漂亮?

夏日的温情,会变成秋天的成熟和蕴籍,深藏在心底。

喜欢。



   
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如梦好!

我也不知道她是谁, 在网上看有我喜欢的图和照片, 我就存起来, 当我有新诗时, 有和我意境的图我就选用配诗用了.

你说得很好也很对'夏日的温情,会变成秋天的成熟和蕴籍,深藏在心底".这正是我要表达的.

你挺懂我啊?!

Originally posted by [i]如梦[/i] at 2006-11-5 05:59 PM:
头像是谁,那么漂亮?

夏日的温情,会变成秋天的成熟和蕴籍,深藏在心底。

喜欢。


沉默是金
http://blog.sina.com.cn/m/binghuablog


   
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 wxll
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鼻子稍短,脸膛微扁,92分。



   
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先磨真逗啊。


[size=3] 土干[/size]


   
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哈哈...先磨, 你这样挑剔啊? 那你家大嫂一定是绝代佳人啦?!

Originally posted by [i]wxll[/i] at 2006-11-5 08:12 PM:
鼻子稍短,脸膛微扁,92分。


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是呀! 那话要是你说的就不奇怪了, 是先磨说的, 我就觉得有点怪了, 原来先磨也有油墨的一面, 可能是受你土干的影响.

Originally posted by [i]tugan[/i] at 2006-11-5 08:14 PM:
先磨真逗啊。


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哪里的话。我们都不怎的才特别向往真善美。我和她都欣赏、喜欢刘亦菲。

Originally posted by [i]冰花[/i] at 2006-11-5 04:33 PM:
哈哈...先磨, 你这样挑剔啊? 那你家大嫂一定是绝代佳人啦?!



   
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刘亦菲


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this is not the best one.

Originally posted by [i]冰花[/i] at 2006-11-5 09:20 PM:



   
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[url] http://ent.qq.com/a/20060927/000019.htm [/url]



   
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这个如呵?!

Originally posted by [i]wxll[/i] at 2006-11-6 01:22 AM:
this is not the best one.


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Shi ta, shi ta......

Originally posted by [i]冰花[/i] at 2006-11-5 09:28 PM:
这个!



   
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眼光不错, 那张是清秀亮丽, 黑色背景更显她的高雅柔美脱俗动人, 这也是我喜欢的一张!

Originally posted by [i]wxll[/i] at 2006-11-6 01:29 AM:
Shi ta, shi ta......


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看了刘亦菲这张,你的那个诗歌配图只能打82分,对不起了。



   
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