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兰JJ,诗的格局更大些,就好了。

弱了些,有点呻吟了。勿怪,我喜欢你。


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Originally posted by [i]rong[/i] at 2006-8-7 01:49 PM:
兰JJ,诗的格局更大些,就好了。

弱了些,有点呻吟了。勿怪,我喜欢你。

哈,MM, 我怎么会怪你呢,特喜欢你的锋利劲儿。。。拿出你的绝门暗器俺都不怕哈。。。。:P

谢谢大家的鼓励。。。。:)


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