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[旧作]流年

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兰若
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[size=4][font=黑体]前世[/font][/size]

一转身,一千年过去了
一千朵莲花开了
一千颗石子拼成的池塘
一千把锁沉下去

水下,藕是孤魂

[size=4][font=黑体]今生[/font][/size]

你盯着我看
我的胭脂掉了
水袖子
遮住手,手心里
藏着硬币

正反 反正 的

[size=4][font=黑体]流年[/font][/size]

你听他们说话
你听见他们说话

你坐在树下
土中有蚂蚁


思无邪.


   
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杜欣欣
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喜欢“水下,藕是孤魂”,不过小姑娘家家的~~怎发这么多感叹。



   
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兰若
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哎,欣欣姐姐,你还是被我的外表所迷惑啦。。。:lol: 😆


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尚能饭
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Originally posted by [i]杜欣欣[/i] at 2006-7-22 06:35 PM:
喜欢“水下,藕是孤魂”,不过小姑娘家家的~~怎发这么多感叹。

嗯,老尚也不解--小妹妹失恋了?:confused:


不作公卿非无福命都缘懒,难成仙佛为爱文章又恋花。


   
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兰若
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哎,曾经沧海难为水,这年头,谁还没点伤心事啊~~:P:P


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 wxll
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不用怕,谁敢惹你,我们会发出网联追杀令。



   
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兰若
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谢谢WXLL,有这么多哥哥姐姐罩着我,我啥也不怕。。。;)

PS: 我今天说话有点黑社会,sorry...:P


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遮住手,手心里
藏着硬币

正反 反正 的

兰JJ,开始感慨时间。


欲说还休,欲说还休。不说也罢。


   
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