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[旧作]飞翔

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兰若
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飞翔

现在,我坐在黑夜里
想象飞鸟的翅膀
它们离墙那么近
让我
睁不开眼睛

或许
就是一堵墙
或许,你把手伸进水里
会摸到土地的呼吸
会摸到一些愿望
让你
坐下来聆听
飞翔的声音


思无邪.


   
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"你把手伸进水里
会摸到土地的呼吸"
有意思, 似乎与我的两句诗反其道行之: "那就深入冻土吧 / 深入 / 春水的脉搏"



   
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兰若
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好玩,还真是相反呢,你从坚强中觅温柔,我从温柔中寻坚强。。。:)


思无邪.


   
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力度不一样。


欲说还休,欲说还休。不说也罢。


   
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