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兰若
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[color=Purple][font=宋体]亲爱,在夜晚
你找不到我。
你找到的回忆
是圆的,星空
也是圆的。

我却沉入水底,
象一条鱼
慢慢变得清澈。[/font][/color]


思无邪.


   
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很静,卧室灯熄了,黯淡的辉光里鱼慢慢沉到缸底...



   
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八十一子
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若兰的小诗似不经意,却往往有让人怦然心动的意象。好。

Originally posted by [i]兰若[/i] at 2006-4-17 03:00 AM:
[color=Purple][font=宋体]亲爱,在夜晚
你找不到我。
你找到的回忆
是圆的,星空
也是圆的。

我却沉入水底,
象一条鱼
慢慢变得清澈。[/font][/color]

[[i] Last edited by 兰若 on 2006-4-17 at 04:2..


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兰若
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谢谢况也,八十一子,嘿嘿,八十一子,我喜欢你的签名档,有创意。。。:)


思无邪.


   
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如霏
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最爱兰兰的诗,精灵一般的诗意,学也学不来。



   
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rong
 rong
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圆的,是满的,也是空的。

能听见你的呼吸,我们有相同的频率,收到来自遥远恒星的声音。


欲说还休,欲说还休。不说也罢。


   
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