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小蚕
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[size=5][b][color=Red]累[/color][/b][/size]

[color=Green][size=4][font=宋体]
命运
牵着我的脖子
飞跑
好累

时间正穿透我的心脏
在我耳边说
别走得太远
自由渗漏在沙地上
留下一片泡沫

生命的河流不通向
无限
我坐下来
沉思[/font][/size][/color]



   
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黎京
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喷饭了。



   
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 wxll
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好一阵子不见小蚕,累了请多来这里歇歇。



   
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小蚕
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Originally posted by [i]wxll[/i] at 2006-5-27 10:06 PM:
好一阵子不见小蚕,累了请多来这里歇歇。

是啊,正高效率浪费生命。到这里还真是一种休息。



   
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小蚕:

你家的四爷是不是特厉害?怎么把你整成了个哲学家!:)))

写得有意思。


不作公卿非无福命都缘懒,难成仙佛为爱文章又恋花。


   
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Originally posted by [i]小蚕[/i] at 2006-5-27 07:14 PM:
[size=5][b][color=Red]累[/color][/b][/size]

[color=Green][size=4][font=宋体]
命运
牵着我的脖子
飞跑
好累
..

可怜的阿白终于蹲在那儿不跑了,虽然没有自由,但不累。



   
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小蚕想象丰富,笔触空灵却牵连着生命,因此走得很远。



   
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Originally posted by [i]尚能饭[/i] at 2006-5-28 07:24 AM:
小蚕:

你家的四爷是不是特厉害?怎么把你整成了个哲学家!:)))

苏格拉底说:“一个漂亮的老婆能使男人快乐,一个糟糕的老婆能把男人变成哲学家。“
难道这话搁女人这就成了:
“一个窝囊的丈夫能使女人快乐,一个厉害的男人能把女人变成哲学家。“?

尚爷颠覆了苏格拉底。



   
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Originally posted by [i]冷热[/i] at 2006-5-28 12:25 PM:
。。。。因此走得很远。

冷兄,思想可以走得很远,生命走快了,离休止就不远了。如何把无限的思维塞到有限的生命里,连上帝都没有办法,只好发明了学校,跑接力赛。



   
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小蚕
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问灵沼好。这里有不少新朋友。(如果是老朋友,新马甲,也问好)



   
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这诗很有灵气.
有动感! 好.
问小蚕 好!


沉默是金
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好诗。



   
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读了之后真是感到从骨头里面都累得慌!



   
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即便,生命的河流
通向无限
充其量,我们也只认识
其中的一小段

来一趟颇为随机
一路上的事情也基本偶然
哪里有什么目的地
不如且行且歌且看

打一打油取乐。小天虫 take it easy.


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Quote:
"自由渗漏在沙地上
留下一片泡沫"

对于图中那条狗(好可怜),自由更象它嘴边的泡沫,跟着它跑,却永远不能把它解放。



   
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