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春雪

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非马
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[size=5]春雪[/size]

爱做梦的你
此刻想必嘴边漾著甜笑
我临窗伫立
看白雪
在你梦中飞舞回旋

真想拨通越洋电话
把话筒举向窗外的天空
让梦中的你也听听
氤氤氲氲
雪花飘荡的声音



   
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冰花
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这首意境和表达都很美! 非常喜欢~~


沉默是金
http://blog.sina.com.cn/m/binghuablog


   
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蓉琪
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纯情,纯美。



   
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非马
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谢谢冰花和蓉琪. 夏天好!



   
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冬雪儿
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“爱做梦的你
此刻想必嘴边漾著甜笑
我临窗伫立
看白雪
在你梦中飞舞回旋”——好纯净啊。幻境幻化:“看白雪/在你梦中飞舞回旋”



   
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