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一元是学地质的?还是和忍忍一样改行了?



   
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谢七月读。我不是学地质的,但老实交待,我所涉及过的学科,确实相当之杂,唉,多而不精,年轻时性兴使然,后悔晚矣。



   
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 xw
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这一首有点意思。一元拓诗路了,可喜!但,还是不甚明晰。



   
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同意XW的评价,一元,你的诗越来越大气、宽广而不失生动了。喜欢~~



   
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谢谢xw和蓉琪读。电影“the day after tomorrow” 就是以新仙女木冰期为创作基础的,这新仙女木时代的地球似乎真有点搞笑,好好开始回春了,却因一场不合时宜不合地宜的大水把自己打回冬天,这对今人不无启示。地球的平衡很多情况下实际脆弱得很,气候变异的后果并不一定是缓慢累积的,过了某个临界点不是没有发生急转而下突变的可能。



   
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忍忍
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Originally posted by [i]July[/i] at 2010-4-11 22:06:
一元是学地质的?还是和忍忍一样改行了?

别说俺改行了行不行? :wa:



   
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冬雪儿
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“冬天正在悄悄溶化
春天是场汹涌的花汛
阿加锡孜湖决堤
大水撞歪我们的脚印
醉,那年形容一种步态
像你林中起舞,像百兽渐次回归”——真喜欢这一节。那歪着的一行脚印,是醉的一种形容。

好久不见一元了,在忙什么呢?



   
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