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小忍
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Winter

Facts of the recital frozen on the window
With flakes accumulating into the still
Night broods

Breath in my son’s sleep rhythmical
But the season fills my memory
with snow

Mercury column descends in swift tempo
the quarter-worth of neglect
abstract no more

Culture is a wall
halting beyond the threshold
while time losing itself little by little

As the storm leaves tiptoe
The Sonatina by Kuhlau washes over
earlier than usual

“Is an accident accidental?”
In the sound of the piano
Lies a logic answer to an illogical

事实封冻着窗扉
雪花静静地叠加

在思想

儿子梦中的呼吸均匀
季节却在我的记忆里
一片
白茫茫

墙上的水银柱快速下降
系数为四分之一的疏忽
凝固
不再抽象

文化是堵墙
稍息在门槛
任凭时间一分一秒
失去形状

黎明点脚来到
库劳的小奏鸣曲
骤响
早于往常

“意外究竟是不是意外?”
无逻辑的问题
有了逻辑性的
答案?


忍,一忍,三忍,无忍,不忍,小不忍,忍无可忍,小忍一傲,再忍一会,心恕,模糊数学,Impeach Obama,笨猴猴,折腾,不折腾,心刀一闪,心字头上一把刀,


   
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顶。


忍,一忍,三忍,无忍,不忍,小不忍,忍无可忍,小忍一傲,再忍一会,心恕,模糊数学,Impeach Obama,笨猴猴,折腾,不折腾,心刀一闪,心字头上一把刀,


   
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小忍啊,当网管和做好人不一样,不能忍,一忍全网站就都乱了套了。

花被摧残,杂草乱长,那叫什么伊甸园?:wink:

负责任是需要做出牺牲的。:lol:


因为无能为力,所以尽力而为。


   
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大诗人,给评一评。:laugh::laugh::laugh:


忍,一忍,三忍,无忍,不忍,小不忍,忍无可忍,小忍一傲,再忍一会,心恕,模糊数学,Impeach Obama,笨猴猴,折腾,不折腾,心刀一闪,心字头上一把刀,


   
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我把小说换了换地方。


忍,一忍,三忍,无忍,不忍,小不忍,忍无可忍,小忍一傲,再忍一会,心恕,模糊数学,Impeach Obama,笨猴猴,折腾,不折腾,心刀一闪,心字头上一把刀,


   
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这首诗歌挺好,而且中文的比英文的好。欢迎回归。有阿克玛托娃的味道。



   
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怎么又中文更好了?我怎么看不出来?:wink:


因为无能为力,所以尽力而为。


   
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Originally posted by [i]zhaoyang[/i] at 2009-2-17 06:23 PM:
这首诗歌挺好,而且中文的比英文的好。欢迎回归。有阿克玛托娃的味道。

嗯,这茶,喝到这会儿,才喝出味来。:laugh::laugh::laugh:


忍,一忍,三忍,无忍,不忍,小不忍,忍无可忍,小忍一傲,再忍一会,心恕,模糊数学,Impeach Obama,笨猴猴,折腾,不折腾,心刀一闪,心字头上一把刀,


   
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小忍,大诗人都夸了。还有吗?请多上几首。


因为无能为力,所以尽力而为。


   
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小忍啊:代李四问候笨笨,就说大诗人想念她呢



   
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Originally posted by [i]zhaoyang[/i] at 2009-2-21 02:50 PM:
小忍啊:代李四问候笨笨,就说大诗人想念她呢

OK。


忍,一忍,三忍,无忍,不忍,小不忍,忍无可忍,小忍一傲,再忍一会,心恕,模糊数学,Impeach Obama,笨猴猴,折腾,不折腾,心刀一闪,心字头上一把刀,


   
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