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[原创] 《蜜蜂采蜜》

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红霞
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昨天樱桃树上蜜蜂嗡嗡叫,且阳光明媚,我忘了拍照了,今天下雨了,蜜蜂不来了,我又想起来拍照了,那是怕花被淋湿了不好看了才想起来的。看这树枝上一个小蜜蜂也没有。多可惜!


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Originally posted by [i]红霞[/i] at 2009-3-12 02:44 AM:
昨天樱桃树上蜜蜂嗡嗡叫,且阳光明媚,我忘了拍照了,今天下雨了,蜜蜂不来了,我又想起来拍照了,那是怕花被淋湿了不好看了才想起来的。看这树枝上一个小蜜蜂也没有。多可惜!

看来人和小蜜蜂之间也会有阴差阳错的时候。好自然清美的画面! 谢红霞 🙂


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虔谦好啊!其实每个人都喜欢清美的自然画面。但现在的自然环境每天都在污染中,这让人非常担忧。因为环境恶化直接会导致人类的灭亡。


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律诗讲平仄对仗, 和词性对应及押韵, 多读多学有利于写新诗~~~


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谢谢冰花的指教!


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