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[旧作] 雨

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弄堂是直的,伞是圆的,
门是黑的女人穿着红的,
风是硬的,步子是软的,
雨丝是凉的脸庞是烫的。

马路是弯的,树是秃的,
豆浆热的臭豆腐是香的,
过街是奔的,命是捡的,
自行车飞的公车是喘的。

霓虹灯红的,酒是绿的,
钱是流淌的女人是卖的,
人是聪明的,我是呆的,
上海是老的世界是新的。


V。F。


   
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Ha! - 上海是老的世界是新的。

老上海~新世界


是非是我非我


   
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weili
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人是聪明的,我是呆的,

这个自嘲,其实是反义~~


因为无能为力,所以尽力而为。


   
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soooooo--?



   
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(@zhaoyang)
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文兄,再加一句:和屈原渔父“众人皆醉我独醒”的两千多年的老调有什么大不了的区别啊?



   
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weili
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你俩是好玩。这个急着逗,那个就不理。:))


因为无能为力,所以尽力而为。


   
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