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我劝红颜莫自怜,野花亦有咏诗人(打油诗)

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章凝
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和红霞

说风道雨愁心神,
冰雪过后又一春;
我劝红颜莫自怜,
野花亦有咏诗人。:lol:


我的黑暗是一湖水,我的光明是一条鱼


   
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不知名的野花充满在世界各地,人们不知道他们是什么花,有时候也根本无视他们的存在,但他们却无私的为这世界奉献着一片绿色。


让知识引导我们认识宇宙、了解自己吧!


   
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Originally posted by [i]章凝[/i] at 2008-11-19 02:40 PM:
和红霞

说风道雨愁心神,
冰雪过后又一春;
我劝红颜莫自怜,
野花亦有识货人。:lol:


帮章凝将这句改一下:我劝红颜莫自怜,野花亦有识货人。——野花自有摘花人。:P



   
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还可以改成这样的:我劝红颜莫自怜,野花亦有识货人。——野花自有采花人。我就时常采一些野花放在我家中。家中的气息立即清香起来。



   
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Originally posted by [i]冬雪儿[/i] at 2008-11-20 02:19 AM:
还可以改成这样的:我劝红颜莫自怜,野花亦有识货人。——野花自有采花人。我就时常采一些野花放在我家中。家中的气息立即清香起来。

路边的野花不要!踩…… 😛



   
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瞎掰的几句大家还觉得好玩?

“识货”很不好,改为“咏诗”了。

“红颜”也太俗,谁帮忙想个好的?


因为我和黑夜结下了不解之缘 所以我爱太阳


   
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Originally posted by [i]thesunlover[/i] at 2008-11-21 05:16 AM:
瞎掰的几句大家还觉得好玩?

“识货”很不好,改为“咏诗”了。

“红颜”也太俗,谁帮忙想个好的?


“瞎掰的几句大家还觉得好玩?”——你瞎掰大家就跟着你瞎闹呗。:P:D

中午头脑不清醒,到这儿来一闹,头脑闹清醒了:laugh:。
好了,下线干我的正事去了。:wink:



   
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Originally posted by [i]JL[/i] at 2008-11-21 02:23 AM:

路边的野花不要!踩…… 😛


我不是——踩,我是——摘回家。:)



   
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