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冰花
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秋思

冰花

思念有四季
我的思念走进了秋季

秋风把思念吹起
片片枫叶撒落一地

风儿卷着枫叶
向你飞去

当你看到空中旋转的枫叶
请你 打开窗

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9/29/2008


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冰花
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是九月写的, 算是写给十月的诗吧~~~


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[url] http://www.yidian.org/viewthread.php?tid=10108.html [/url]

懒得搬过去, 就先把一~~九那线搬过来~~


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2008 年 10 月 21 日 星期 二 侨报

[url] http://www.usqiaobao.com:81/qiaobao/html/2008-10/21/content_100459.htm [/url]


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这个星期,是秋叶的尾声了。



   
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好久不见? 你好吧? 愿在美国的金融风暴中, 都安然无恙, 一切都好~~~~遥握~~~

[url] http://blog.sina.com.cn/binghuablog [/url] 我博客里有不少对我诗集和诗的评论, 有空可去看看,多多指正:

Originally posted by [i]如梦[/i] at 2008-10-29 03:13 AM:
这个星期,是秋叶的尾声了。


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冰花好。金融风暴时,大概更为自己有一份工作而感到庆幸吧。

我有空一定会去看的。:)



   
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心——怎么使我联到到“掌上明珠”呢?文字真诱人。



   
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好的~~

Originally posted by [i]如梦[/i] at 2008-10-30 03:24 AM:
冰花好。金融风暴时,大概更为自己有一份工作而感到庆幸吧。

我有空一定会去看的。:)


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目前来看,只有你读懂了我的隐喻~~~知音啊~~~抱抱~~~

Originally posted by [i]冬雪儿[/i] at 2008-10-30 12:43 PM:
让她
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心——怎么使我联到到“掌上明珠”呢?文字真诱人。


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