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[原创]秋天来了

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更其
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秋天来了 我瘦
电话不响的季节
开始飘来荡去

在天空下藏匿
你不能劫持我的影子
我透明 掌纹清香

我还在等 等待季风
大西洋里
一点想念接另一点想念

两米之内
升起一场潮汐

2008/9/1作
(小诗一首。想了。)



   
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再见渔网花
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是秋天!我喜欢!


我的脑袋,在去年冬天,就被撞坏了,山野里,开满了白的花


   
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噢,更其的诗也好棒



   
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weili
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也喜欢更其的诗。


因为无能为力,所以尽力而为。


   
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冰花
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这首小诗很CUTE! 很感染人! 欣赏!


沉默是金
http://blog.sina.com.cn/m/binghuablog


   
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冰花
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加问一句,你在哪儿呀?


沉默是金
http://blog.sina.com.cn/m/binghuablog


   
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更其
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哦,我在中国大陆,一个南方二流省份的省会城市,从世界一流眼光来看,就是个下三烂的四流城市。呵呵



   
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