伊甸文苑 [原创]浮萍 Page 3 / 3 Prev 1 2 3 诗苑 Last Post by weili 19 years ago 32 Posts 5 Users 0 Reactions 4,017 Views RSS thesunlover (@thesunlover) Member Admin Joined: 20 years ago Posts: 16382 14/10/2007 8:27 pm 第一段有两个“和”，不好！“和”这种字用起来需要格外慎重，尽量不用，最近我用了一个“与”，反复掂量。 还需要改！ 因为我和黑夜结下了不解之缘 所以我爱太阳 ReplyQuote weili (@weili) Illustrious Member Guest Joined: 20 years ago Posts: 15337 Topic starter 14/10/2007 8:57 pm 好，听你的，去一个和，怎么样？ 因为无能为力，所以尽力而为。 ReplyQuote Page 3 / 3 Prev 1 2 3
