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舞曼西楼
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或者

或者无意中走来

在两峰间

挂起各自清涧的风帘

所谓秋天的太阳

也不过是你转身的瞬间

你微笑的侧影

将我锁在今生的囚栏

或者不得不离开

在寒沙萦水的尽头

独自点数

剩余的岁晚

如果欢会在今宵

为何要在黯黯斜阳里

愁眉不展?

或者厮守在梦里

一切前世的伤口

会在醒来时复原

星子酣醉时的计议

在枕边留一个花的图案

来年,等到来年

或者我出现在

你的门前


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weili
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好诗!喜欢。


因为无能为力,所以尽力而为。


   
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或者你在和冰花.  喜欢!



   
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Originally posted by [i]weili[/i] at 2007-1-10 06:42 PM:
好诗!喜欢。

weili 好!喜欢你的小说:))


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Originally posted by [i]luhua[/i] at 2007-1-10 10:40 PM:
或者你在和冰花.  喜欢!

谢谢喜欢:))


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喜欢.



   
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Originally posted by [i]舞曼西楼[/i] at 2007-1-11 12:05 AM:

weili 好!喜欢你的小说:))

谢谢你喜欢。正在继续写,希望你能不客气地提意见。:))


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