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Originally posted by [i]weili[/i] at 2008-10-9 13:24:
瑞秋在写中部,中部才是美国的心脏。:))

你是说中部红彤彤:) 越穷的地方越红:wink:



   
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我认为中部代表美国,而不是纽约、加州。:))


因为无能为力,所以尽力而为。


   
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Originally posted by [i]weili[/i] at 2008-10-15 02:04:
我认为中部代表美国,而不是纽约、加州。:))

瓦(忍不住感叹一句), 您这大作家怎么这么保守,跟红脖子们一个认识水平?!不行,为力别跟我辩论哈,我说话冲,一会儿就把人得罪光了。不说了,说说你觉得我写的密尔沃基太蜻蜓点水皮毛肤浅了?是不是多发些议论才好?



   
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[url] http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Golda_Meir [/url]

Golda Meir was the fourth prime minister of the State of Israel.

After graduating from the Milwaukee State Normal School (a predecessor of the University of Wisconsin-Milwaukee), she taught in public schools.

Golda Meir was elected Prime Minister of Israel on 17 March 1969. She was described as the "Iron Lady". David Ben-Gurion used to call her "the best man in the government."

Munich Olympics

In the wake of the Munich massacre at the 1972 Summer Olympics, Outraged at the perceived lack of global action, she authorized the Mossad to hunt down and assassinate the Black September and PFLP operatives who took part in the massacre.[21] The 1986 TV film Sword of Gideon were loosely based on these events.

Yom Kippur War

Following the Yom Kippur War, Meir's government was plagued by in-fighting and questions over Israel's lack of preparedness for the war.



   
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我以为像你和我这样居住在美国和加拿大的乡下,才更有可能了解北美风土人情。:wink:

Originally posted by [i]瑞秋[/i] at 2008-10-14 10:52 PM:
瓦(忍不住感叹一句), 您跟红脖子们一个认识水平


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海雨讲讲威州,我虽然以前常去,也能体会出来威州人和明州人有点不一样,但是说不出来细节。我喜欢你说密尔沃基的大湖边对面山上一段私人一段公家,少了芝城的匠气,更接近自然。



   
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感觉第一自然段节奏可以慢些。

能不能给我们写写苏比利尔湖和密执根湖这两个大湖?


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Originally posted by [i]weili[/i] at 2008-11-1 21:48:
感觉第一自然段节奏可以慢些。

能不能给我们写写苏比利尔湖和密执根湖这两个大湖?

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再试一次,好了. 真怪啊.



   
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瑞秋请你点击一下“短消息”,有个网友想和你联系。如果“短消息”功能不灵,给我写个E:[email]weilicacn@gmail.com[/email]. 我给你她的地址。


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Originally posted by [i]weili[/i] at 2008-11-2 21:47:
瑞秋请你点击一下“短消息”,有个网友想和你联系。如果“短消息”功能不灵,给我写个E:[email]weilicacn@gmail.com[/email]. 我给你她的地址。

谢为力,我已经回信了.

给我发信的这位同学, 是,我是CND 的 Rachel_, 谢谢喜欢我写的,那我再贴一篇续集吧. 请多提意见,我特别希望听见说我写的哪儿不好. 比如为力的建议就对我帮助很大,我有空时会着手改.

我另外还写了几篇, 只开了头, 没完成, 放在这儿说是想逼迫自己完成.

1. 小城, 春光无限
2. Aitkin 小城

我准备先写一系列的沿密西西比河在明尼苏达段河畔小城, 然后再写些明尼苏达的风土人情.



   
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