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“無情歲月增中減﹐有味詩書苦後甘。”古人的對聯多麼工。此之謂對而成聯。不對
者不成其為聯。

不過古人知識缺乏﹐“歲月”與“詩書”也不能算對得非常工。歲月是時間﹐應該
對空間字。方向屬空間概念。所以我用“東西”來對“歲月”。得聯如下﹕

“無情歲月增中減﹐有價東西漲後跌。”


天生我材竟何用﹖


   
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無情歲月增中減,有志磨礪底中升。



   
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無情歲月增中減 有义星辰降还升



   
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有義不如有信。


天生我材竟何用﹖


   
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Originally posted by [i]海外逸士[/i] at 2008-5-20 09:58 PM:
有義不如有信。

改得好。



   
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