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Originally posted by [i]oak[/i] at 2009-1-20 01:31 PM:
春节将至,上级机关征集对联,欢迎我华夏儿女踊跃参与。上联为:

[color=Blue][size=4]上级压下级,一级压一级级级加码马到成功[/size][/color]


这个本来就是下联。


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Originally posted by [i]杨林[/i] at 2009-1-20 18:14:
[color=Blue]上级压下级,一级压一级级级加码马到成功[/color]
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不错,但还有更好的。不过,请受奖了。

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Originally posted by [i]笑言[/i] at 2009-1-20 18:38:

这个本来就是下联。

大家一定多累了吧,王晓波的“伟大”我还是没看出来,看来有时间还得继续看。
王晓波还真又有不寻常处:21岁(当年的21岁)就如此精通男女件之事,真是天才。
您说呢?
看下面的下联如何,我认为作者也应该是和王一样伟大。同样,如果把歌曲《咱们老百姓今儿真高兴》理解为“咱老百姓[b]只有今儿个[/b]才高兴”,词作者同样‘伟大’呀。

马上过年了,不乐也要乐。

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Originally posted by [i]oak[/i] at 2009-1-23 01:44 PM:

上级压下级,一级压一级级级加码马到成功
下层蒙上层,一层蒙一层层层掺水水到渠成

这个“下联”有几个问题:1)“到”和“成”字重复(成功,渠成);2)倒数第4和倒数第5两个水字相同;3)“上”“下”呼唤不好;4)上联用“一”,下联也用“一”,不好(我对的也有这个问题)。



   
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