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[原创]情人节

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(@钟梅嘉)
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刷新,刷新又刷新
没有新邮件
远方的爱人啊,
吝啬送张
免费的电子贺卡?

真呆还是假呆?
我的爱人
罗曼蒂克的爱人,
难道,难道你
只浪漫在你的小说,诗歌中?



   
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(@admin)
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情人怨遥夜,竟夕起相思。
情诗里面,怨是灵感催生物质,这首小诗真实可爱啊。



   
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金凤
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热烈欢迎钟梅嘉!

嗔怪中满怀情意啊~~~



   
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weili
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是好诗。

热烈欢迎钟梅嘉!!


因为无能为力,所以尽力而为。


   
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pugongying
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Originally posted by [i]钟梅嘉[/i] at 2008-2-15 07:47 AM:
刷新,刷新又刷新
没有新邮件
远方的爱人啊,
吝啬送张
免费的电子贺卡?

真呆还是假呆?
我的爱人
罗曼蒂克的爱人,
难道,难道你
只浪漫在你的小说,诗歌中?

看来你比诗人还多情:P
对不起,初次相见就开了句玩笑。:cool:


我在低处,只能和低下头来的人说话,,,


   
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冰花
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欢迎和问好!


沉默是金
http://blog.sina.com.cn/m/binghuablog


   
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(@钟梅嘉)
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谢谢楼上各位的回帖.



   
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searain
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How about only keep the first half?



   
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thesunlover
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刚刚看到,欢迎钟梅嘉!:smile:

这个爱人不大好,应该受罚 😡


因为我和黑夜结下了不解之缘 所以我爱太阳


   
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