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查维成
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踱步. 谢谢Lucy。

Originally posted by [i]lucy[/i] at 2006-8-26 11:20 AM:
度步or踱步?(我早早来到教室,见一白发苍苍的老头在教室里度步)

有意思。来北美的第一晚,在小镇MAIN STREET 闲逛......觉得就是好好莱坞电影的布景,每个人都是笑咪咪的......又觉得是童话世界.:)



   
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独善斋主
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老查,我也觉得应该再充实一些。

〉〉既为她的境况也我自己的冒失,

既为她的境况也为我自己的冒失,


越老越小,小到没了。


   
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刚来时候的事,忘得快差不多了.等想想也写一段吧.



   
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查兄, 谢谢纳拙.

>>
九七年十月,
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可否虚写. "那年十月"好象更妥些.

我没出息, 专搞些不上台面的雕虫小技. 但为我喜欢的朋友, 乐此不疲! 😉



   
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查维成
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确实需要增加些内容。谢谢斋主亲自为我纠正,已经加进去了。

Originally posted by [i]独善斋主[/i] at 2006-8-26 03:31 PM:
老查,我也觉得应该再充实一些。

〉〉既为她的境况也我自己的冒失,

既为她的境况也为我自己的冒失,



   
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牡丹妹妹,刚来时的感觉跟现在不一样,趁没忘记,赶快记下来。
余兄,你要是编辑,一定会非常出色,因为你不光改错别字和病句。



   
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有谁知道幽默老师老查的近况如何了?


因为我和黑夜结下了不解之缘 所以我爱太阳


   
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T


因为无能为力,所以尽力而为。


   
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