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Snatch a Quiet Moment

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小忍
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On war-burned West Bank
I squatted in a shell pit
Watching ants migrate

战火焚西岸
唯我屈膝入弹坑
静看蚁求生


忍,一忍,三忍,无忍,不忍,小不忍,忍无可忍,小忍一傲,再忍一会,心恕,模糊数学,Impeach Obama,笨猴猴,折腾,不折腾,心刀一闪,心字头上一把刀,


   
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翻得还真好。你的原诗很好



   
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weili
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小忍,虽然你的头像是臭小子,兆阳还是认为你是女孩。:))


因为无能为力,所以尽力而为。


   
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小忍
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Originally posted by [i]weili[/i] at 2009-3-21 10:11 AM:
小忍,虽然你的头像是臭小子,兆阳还是认为你是女孩。:))

HAS HE FALLEN IN LOVE WITH ME ?:laugh::laugh::laugh:


忍,一忍,三忍,无忍,不忍,小不忍,忍无可忍,小忍一傲,再忍一会,心恕,模糊数学,Impeach Obama,笨猴猴,折腾,不折腾,心刀一闪,心字头上一把刀,


   
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小忍
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Originally posted by [i]zhaoyang[/i] at 2009-3-21 12:18 AM:
翻得还真好。你的原诗很好

谢兆阳。


忍,一忍,三忍,无忍,不忍,小不忍,忍无可忍,小忍一傲,再忍一会,心恕,模糊数学,Impeach Obama,笨猴猴,折腾,不折腾,心刀一闪,心字头上一把刀,


   
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如果你說你不是女孩﹐你還得不到這兩句稱讚。女性的魅力呀。


天生我材竟何用﹖


   
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小忍
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Originally posted by [i]海外逸士[/i] at 2009-3-21 03:10 PM:
如果你說你不是女孩﹐你還得不到這兩句稱讚。女性的魅力呀。

谁说不是。

如果您是女的,或者年轻一点儿,我会去读一读您写的东西。我看过您的照片以后,的确是觉得不会有任何共同语言。


忍,一忍,三忍,无忍,不忍,小不忍,忍无可忍,小忍一傲,再忍一会,心恕,模糊数学,Impeach Obama,笨猴猴,折腾,不折腾,心刀一闪,心字头上一把刀,


   
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謝謝你的坦率。我們之間的代溝是夠大的。


天生我材竟何用﹖


   
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小忍
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谢谢理解。


忍,一忍,三忍,无忍,不忍,小不忍,忍无可忍,小忍一傲,再忍一会,心恕,模糊数学,Impeach Obama,笨猴猴,折腾,不折腾,心刀一闪,心字头上一把刀,


   
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weili
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小忍,
兆阳的眼睛很尖。逸士的脾气最好。:))


因为无能为力,所以尽力而为。


   
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小忍
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Originally posted by [i]weili[/i] at 2009-3-22 05:09 PM:
小忍,
兆阳的眼睛很尖。逸士的脾气最好。:))

同感。

逸士脾气最好, 赞一个。


忍,一忍,三忍,无忍,不忍,小不忍,忍无可忍,小忍一傲,再忍一会,心恕,模糊数学,Impeach Obama,笨猴猴,折腾,不折腾,心刀一闪,心字头上一把刀,


   
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fanghuzhai
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Snatch a Quiet Moment

On war-burned West Bank
I squatted in a shell pit
Watching ants migrate

战火尚余烟
蹲在西岸弹坑边
观蚁离家园



   
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小忍
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Originally posted by [i]fanghuzhai[/i] at 2009-3-22 05:12 PM:
Snatch a Quiet Moment

On war-burned West Bank
I squatted in a shell pit
Watching ants migrate

战火尚余烟
蹲在西岸弹坑边
观蚁离家园

这个好, 赞一个。 谢谢老方。俺做了您快两年的FAN了,这是您第一次帮俺。


忍,一忍,三忍,无忍,不忍,小不忍,忍无可忍,小忍一傲,再忍一会,心恕,模糊数学,Impeach Obama,笨猴猴,折腾,不折腾,心刀一闪,心字头上一把刀,


   
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程宝林
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老程也来凑个热闹:

西岸战火土亦焚
弹坑吾独蹲
蝼蚁怜众生



   
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小忍
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Originally posted by [i]程宝林[/i] at 2009-3-22 08:46 PM:
老程也来凑个热闹:

西岸战火土亦焚
弹坑吾独蹲
蝼蚁怜众生

谢谢,俺有点感动了。

俺真的是对不起大家。


忍,一忍,三忍,无忍,不忍,小不忍,忍无可忍,小忍一傲,再忍一会,心恕,模糊数学,Impeach Obama,笨猴猴,折腾,不折腾,心刀一闪,心字头上一把刀,


   
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