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Topic starter 13/06/2008 12:18 am

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情人

【马里兰州】冰花

夏日的傍晚

　　环湖独自散步

　　湖边的长凳上

　　坐着一对情人

　　我望着湖面

　　望着湖对岸

　　夕阳烧红的彩云

　　比身旁的草木对我更亲近

　　泪水顺着脸颊滑落湖面

　　引起了一阵心颤

　　远方的彩云

　　才是我真正的情人

注: 此诗写于2008年6月8日于美国

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Topic starter 13/06/2008 4:55 am

发表稿和原稿差一个字, 还是想以原稿为准 , 故把原稿贴上! 一字之差意思就不一样啦~~

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13/06/2008 9:21 pm

请解释一下。
情人不是爱人？：))

Originally posted by [i]冰花[/i] at 2008-6-12 07:25 PM:
发表稿和原稿差一个字, 还是想以原稿为准 , 故把原稿贴上! 一字之差意思就不一样啦~~

因为无能为力，所以尽力而为。

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13/06/2008 10:19 pm

可能彩云才是永恒的情人。

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Topic starter 14/06/2008 7:56 am

哈哈!

我这里的情人可能=相爱的人=恋人=爱人=知音

我也说不清~~~~

又是一首"仁者见仁"?:confused:

Originally posted by [i]weili[/i] at 2008-6-13 03:51 PM:
请解释一下。
情人不是爱人？：))

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Topic starter 14/06/2008 7:58 am

由此可推出还是没有情人? 😉

Originally posted by [i]月满西楼[/i] at 2008-6-13 04:49 PM:
可能彩云才是永恒的情人。

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14/06/2008 8:01 am

Originally posted by [i]冰花[/i] at 2008-6-14 02:28 AM:
由此可推出还是没有情人? 😉

情人在远方~~~，真是思念得紧啊:frown::frown:

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14/06/2008 8:10 am

Originally posted by [i]冰花[/i] at 2008-6-14 02:28 AM:
由此可推出还是没有情人? 😉

哇~哇~号陶大哭！

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14/06/2008 8:32 am

看了两遍才看出是哪个字。觉得“对我更亲近”似乎比“离我更亲近”合理。要么是“离我更近”。

Originally posted by [i]冰花[/i] at 2008-6-12 06:25 PM:
发表稿和原稿差一个字, 还是想以原稿为准 , 故把原稿贴上! 一字之差意思就不一样啦~~

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Topic starter 14/06/2008 5:17 pm

思念是美好的~~~:wink::laugh:

Originally posted by [i]笑雨[/i] at 2008-6-14 02:31 AM:

情人在远方~~~，真是思念得紧啊:frown::frown:

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Topic starter 14/06/2008 5:20 pm

快找,多找几个更好~~~KIDDING!
美丽漂亮的西MM, 快成大众情人了,看你那玉照, 多少银流口水呀~~~~~~~~~~~~

Originally posted by [i]月满西楼[/i] at 2008-6-14 02:40 AM:

哇~哇~号陶大哭！

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Topic starter 14/06/2008 5:26 pm

很久不见! 问好!

你读得很认真, 说得非常对, 所以我还是用原稿了!:wink::smile:

Originally posted by [i]如梦[/i] at 2008-6-14 03:02 AM:
看了两遍才看出是哪个字。觉得“对我更亲近”似乎比“离我更亲近”合理。要么是“离我更近”。

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14/12/2008 5:15 am

这首和海涅“诗歌集”里的爱情诗异曲同工，放在“诗歌集”里谁也不会发现有不
同。当年迷“诗歌集”迷得一塌糊涂。

冰花你在马里兰州的哪边？我真怀念马里兰，我的第二故乡。

我的黑暗是一湖水，我的光明是一条鱼

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14/12/2008 5:55 am

问冰花好~

思无邪.

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Topic starter 14/12/2008 8:31 am

真的? 过奖了吧? 原来你喜欢这种有意境的海涅“诗歌集”风格?

我在Potomac River 和石头城之间, 好地方吧?! 想第二故乡就回来看看吗~~~:wink:

我还以为你还在MD, 总想你不是我邻居吧? 原来你搬走了呀~~~:wink:

Originally posted by [i]章凝[/i] at 2008-12-13 11:45 PM:
这首和海涅“诗歌集”里的爱情诗异曲同工，放在“诗歌集”里谁也不会发现有不
同。当年迷“诗歌集”迷得一塌糊涂。

冰花你在马里兰州的哪边？我真怀念马里兰，我的第二故乡。

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