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[中篇小说] 妙玉活冤孽

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Xiexie.

我是 a 小才子 only, also I give this title by myself for my wife.


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Don't forget I step back 3 times in front of you at CND.


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weili
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厚厚,也谦虚了。

问your wife 好!


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Xiexie, and she 问 you 好!

ZT: some numbers -
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《妙玉活冤孽》(一)在哪里啊?


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Go to 主持-xzhao2, please.


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xzhao2里没有,你没把它编入文集。

[size=5]这个主持,不把自己的剧本放在自己的文集里。[/size]
我给你连上吧。

[中篇小说连载]妙玉活冤孽 - (1)
[url] http://www.yidian.org/viewthread.php?tid=3090&fpage=1&highlight= [/url]


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[中篇小说连载]妙玉活冤孽 - (1) 2006-7-19


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顶!

别具一格的中篇小说。建议进主持文集,将其读完。


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Xiexie Weili.


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文笔蛮生动,绝不难看。只是不晓得几分是主持大人自己的,红楼是再没心思翻了。

“揭语” > “偈语”

“一入候门深如海” > “侯门一入深如海,从此萧郎是路人”。“候”应为“侯爵”的“侯”。

苏州的“阊门”还是“菖门”?现在是叫“阊门”的。


因为我和黑夜结下了不解之缘 所以我爱太阳


   
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偈, 侯 these 2 replaced - thanks.

For 阊门, doesn't matter.

From you view, how many % is mine?


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80+% I guess. It's your creation, or recreation. I have no doubt about it. Don't worry 😛

Nice job. Thanks!


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主持:借爱阳提这贴子,我顺藤摸瓜,找到了你旧年的一贴,却找不到那旧贴上的文
章(我用了伊甸的“搜索”)。请问哪里能找到?感兴趣,想读读。谢谢。

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It should be 红楼艺苑.


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