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(@一元)
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我已背叛了她三次
一次是出生
我背叛了娘腹
一次是入学
我背叛了真理
再一次是择业
我背叛了自己

也许那最后一次
将是受洗
除了诗,我无以为叛
我将成为一个光明正大
不再分行的人

我将从现在起
备足悲哀 要不
喜悦?



   
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冬雪儿
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“我将从现在起
备足悲哀 要不
喜悦?”——是啊,生活将让生命尝尽悲哀或喜悦。



   
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(@一元)
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《前奏》

终于敢于
将自己设成一个命题,终于敢于
为流荡而稍微驻足

当世界鲜活,我却累了
累到只能以平视,端详一座丰碑
从大地之脚,到云中之头
再当胸掏一个窝来
试着将自己填补进去

当我做如上之思,眼光的根部
在颅中生疼,那坚硬的摩擦
如福音的前奏

《Prelude>

Finally I dare
to set myself as a proposition, and finally dare
to stop a while for the sake of wandering

When the world lives up, I’m only tired
so tired as to keep head up, looking at a monument
from the foot on the earth, to the head in the clouds
and dig a nest at the chest
that I try to fill myself in

While I do the above thinking, the root of my vision
pains me inside my skull, and the hard friction
resembles a prelude to the Gospel



   
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兰若
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当我做如上之思,眼光的根部
在颅中生疼,

真好~


思无邪.


   
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(@一元)
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《倘若》

倘若是
所有的岂不是一张网
尽管环节有待联接,并且自圆其说
倘若不是
我们又何苦
等待下一次晚餐

这并不使我好受一些
月还在血中起落,星辰划破脸
白昼,只让一件常识更加浅显



   
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  詩句平實,寓意深刻,有點憂鬱。


千江漁翁,泠然御風。手揮無絃,目送歸鴻。


   
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thesunlover
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Very good!

Originally posted by [i]一元[/i] at 2011-1-23 15:10:
《前奏》

终于敢于
将自己设成一个命题,终于敢于
为流荡而稍微驻足

当世界鲜活,我却累了
累到只能以平视,端详一座丰碑
从大地之脚,到云中之头
再当胸掏一个窝来
试着将自己填补进去

当我做如上..


因为我和黑夜结下了不解之缘 所以我爱太阳


   
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