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[原创] 系列组诗《铁杉之问》八十一章

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冬雪儿
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对政客和党伐是可以以这样的诗文怒斥的:——“酒红灯绿的午池杯斛交错的宴席一掷千金的舞台一笑万两的戏耍冠冕堂皇的文件言不由衷的会议是否能辩得清是非直曲
土壤之于植物植物之于土壤是何重公式中的何种关系是波的粒化还是粒子的波动
那大漠远古的长笑那铜琵铁琶的单调那出使匈奴的汉节上飘荡的是家国真魂吗”



   
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原创:《铁杉之问》八十一章之76.77.78.



   
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回雪儿:仙子近日随团去了大上海观看了世博会。照片基本没拍,照相机忘记充电喽!实在是让雪儿失望喽!



   
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Originally posted by [i]仙子梵音[/i] at 2010-9-21 01:13 AM:
回雪儿:仙子近日随团去了大上海观看了世博会。照片基本没拍,照相机忘记充电喽!实在是让雪儿失望喽!

哦,仙子到世博去了啊。感觉如何?这样难得的机会,怎么就不作好准备哩。看不到你拍的图片,怪遗憾的。:(



   
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回雪儿,我的遗憾更甚,没办法,通知的太急没能有准备时间啊!算是尽收眼底吧!但愿记忆会是长久不衰的!



   
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原创:《铁杉之问》八十一章之79.80.81.



   
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读仙子的诗,能感觉有一种“铮铮”的声音在诗人的心间激荡——“淫雨泛滥物欲横流中你可曾为那玫瑰的红色颤凛/绿色火焰兰色天空流转的白云一澄到底的清澈是梦想者彩色的雪花/是谁把傲气媚气霸气奴气刁气贱气制成鸡尾酒同欢/喜欢劳动的太阳是否也将免费的阳光遍洒沉闷之村/漫画式的信仰卡通式的追寻是新新人类的骄傲吗/摇滚的快餐蹦迪的流韵可否是嵇康屈子秋瑾的逆徒”



   
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拜读了,问候祝福!



   
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Originally posted by [i]冬雪儿[/i] at 2010-9-27 23:28:
读仙子的诗,能感觉有一种“铮铮”的声音在诗人的心间激荡——“淫雨泛滥物欲横流中你可曾为那玫瑰的红色颤凛/绿色火焰兰色天空流转的白云一澄到底的清澈是梦想者彩色的雪花/是谁把傲气媚气霸气奴气刁气贱气制成鸡..

思维的挑唆情感的鼓荡生命的崇高艺术的神剑......都不肯放过我啊!我啊,只有把泣血的灵魂,人类的祈盼,生命的崇高文明的成长流入笔端。
于此《铁杉之问》第一部分(八十一章)发完了,在此,仙子斗胆抛了砖块,意在引美玉欣赏交流!恳请大家们拿起斧头不必客气!

仙子还会将第二部分或者第三部分连续发来,有些占地,雪儿见谅!

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Originally posted by [i]江南忆竹[/i] at 2010-9-27 23:31:
拜读了,问候祝福!

请上坐 奉好茶!!!



   
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Originally posted by [i]江南忆竹[/i] at 2010-9-27 23:31:
拜读了,问候祝福!

请上座 奉好茶!!!:)



   
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今天是您的生日
我的祖国
清晨我放飞一群白鸽
为您衔来一枚橄榄绿
鸽子在崇山峻岭飞过......

祝福祖国繁荣富强!



   
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《铁杉之问》八十一章



   
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仙子梵音
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实在是不懂网络这个新科技,诗歌写的太长,在这里占了很多地,不好意思啦!
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