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[原创] 花园

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兰若
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窗户在画着格子
手心在拍着月亮
一只大大的脚印
把爱情变成种子

我想呢
阳光的饼干会是甜的
明天会是一片晴空


思无邪.


   
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兰若好啊。这首诗歌喜欢。我想到杭州西溪的一处叫抱月轩的景致。李四神远啊:))



   
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weili
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又读兰若,是享受。:wink:


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兰若
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谢谢zhaoyang 为力,写诗也是一种享受~ 🙂


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窗户在画着格子
手心在拍着日子
一只大大的爪子
把爱情变成种子:)



   
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Originally posted by [i]一元[/i] at 2009-9-3 10:33 AM:
窗户在画着格子
手心在拍着日子
一只大大的爪子
把爱情变成种子:)

这个爪子很有特色~ :)


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兰若啊,一元不过从“抱月轩”中的抱字,捉狭一下,变成爪子而已。功劳在我啊



   
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兰若
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Originally posted by [i]zhaoyang[/i] at 2009-9-4 05:35 PM:
兰若啊,一元不过从“抱月轩”中的抱字,捉狭一下,变成爪子而已。功劳在我啊

好吧~


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兰若诗歌很明快。
有空给我们漫谈一下量子力学怎样?



   
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兰若的心,平静甜美,羡慕呀~~



   
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兰,最近是不是没那么忙了?看你又写诗,真好的,分子化学(?)在你看来,也像诗一样纯粹吧。。你似乎沉迷纯粹的事物呢。



   
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谢谢一元~ :)


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Originally posted by [i]蓉琪[/i] at 2009-9-6 09:40 PM:
兰,最近是不是没那么忙了?看你又写诗,真好的,分子化学(?)在你看来,也像诗一样纯粹吧。。你似乎沉迷纯粹的事物呢。

还是忙,不过还好。。。 其实我现在做的东东都是物理,只是忽悠成化学。。。:P 我是很真诚的对待科学的,否则就不会去做这件事了。。。。数学的表达是很纯粹优美的。。。

再见你真好!你说话温柔了好多啊, 我知道为什么,嘿嘿~ 🙂


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Originally posted by [i]兰若[/i] at 2009-9-7 00:48:

还是忙,不过还好。。。 其实我现在做的东东都是物理,只是忽悠成化学。。。:P 我是很真诚的对待科学的,否则就不会去做这件事了。。。。数学的表达是很纯粹优美的。。。

再见你真好!你说话温柔了好多啊..

嘿嘿,我也知道。。:socool:呃,是变了呢。为此我还彻底瘦了,废了三条牛仔裤,其中有一条特别危险,走在街上,我就感觉不对劲,然后迅速把手伸进裤口袋里面提住,才没出洋相呢(幸好英格兰街上就有人穿那种快要掉下来似的牛仔裤,顶多让人误以为俺是潮人:lol:)。。

嗯,我也觉得诗歌、音乐、数学这些都是纯粹的,像是来自宇宙深处的语言,在灵魂与灵魂之间传递。



   
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"嗯,我也觉得诗歌、音乐、数学这些都是纯粹的,像是来自宇宙深处的语言,在灵魂与灵魂之间传递。"

忘了自然本身了吧?:wink:
蓉琪好!


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