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[原创] 两个短的

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兰若
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寂寞

如何让一束花开放成春天呢

你告诉我
在这诺大的城市里
一束花只是一束花
她只能让,寂寞开放。

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迷路

花躲在露水里,
鸟藏在翅膀里。

浸在这个夜晚,
看海水
在沙滩上 孵出月光。


思无邪.


   
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兰若
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今天发的都有“花”在内。。。


思无邪.


   
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[box=#000099]我等到头发白了,才又看到可爱的兰MM。那些会弄疼你的空灵隽永!!![/box]



   
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我等到头发白了,才又看到可爱的兰MM。那些会弄疼你的空灵隽永!!!



   
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》》》那些会弄疼你的空灵隽永!!!

你好,去晨,不太明白这句话的意思啊~可能我又退步了~ 哎~


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天啦,终于又见兰兰若.有种心跳的高兴.



   
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兰若
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谢谢冬雪儿,我也特别高兴啊。。。:)有种回家的感觉,觉得自己不太好,离开了这么久~


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Originally posted by [i]兰若[/i] at 2009-3-26 04:01 PM:
谢谢冬雪儿,我也特别高兴啊。。。:)有种回家的感觉,觉得自己不太好,离开了这么久~

那就不再离开了呀。:)



   
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》》》那些会弄疼你的空灵隽永!!!

>>你好,去晨,不太明白这句话的意思啊~可能我又退步了~ 哎~

你的那些空灵隽永的诗呀,美丽得让人疼痛!我始终都只是一个读者,今天看你回来,一激动就注册说话啦。连字也打不好呢. 把我的第一次给兰若. 挺麻挺吓人的. 连我自己都觉到了. 不想吓着你.



   
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马上要发表伊甸文摘16期诗歌专辑,兰儿不能错过~~


因为无能为力,所以尽力而为。


   
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兰若啊,看到你,李四高兴啊



   
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兰若
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谢谢大家,看来我回来的还挺是时候呢。。。:)


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这些花
开得
一点都不合时节

有时你想
还是
一地的月光好些:)



   
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兰若
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谢谢一元的诗,他们很有意思啊~ :)


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读过兰若不少在伊甸短小、灵气十足的诗歌,喜欢。

网上适合读些短的,比如诗歌类,印刷的书本读很厚的倒也无所谓。



   
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