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[原创]在特蕾莎墓前哭泣

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杜欣欣
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欣欣, 真喜欢这一篇.
记得特蕾莎曾要求每一个来帮助她的见习修女必须在这样的工作中找到喜乐, 然后才允许她们留下来.



   
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可见光,那爱‘场’还是受你的诗的启发,这个词的版权归你。



   
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读着你的“在特蕾莎墓前哭泣”
我也在流泪。



   
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很感人,但前两段似乎没有必要。



   
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谢谢露西。
廖康,谢谢建议,我得想一想怎么处理,因为这是书中的一章。



   
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感动!
那个墙边最矮小的?-----祈祷中的修女,你可否看出哪个是雕像?



   
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Originally posted by [i]金凤[/i] at 2006-8-9 03:48 PM:
感动!
那个墙边最矮小的?-----祈祷中的修女,你可否看出哪个是雕像?

喜欢。
我看也是那个。



   
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>>>没来由地想起了比尔 盖茨---一个和她完全不同的人。他一面用自己的头脑,和平理性地赚钱,一面访问印度和孟加拉的贫民窟,并将此称为“学习之旅”。他是世界首富,去超市买冰淇淋却用折扣卷。他拒绝子女世袭财富,却捐出几百亿回报社会。在这位资本主义的企业家面前,那些所谓的共产主义者是否汗颜?<<<

欣欣,了不起的聪明的编辑!



   
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好文章。看起来大热天欣欣没有白去印度受罪,收获不小。


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杜欣欣
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金凤,凡草猜对了.谢谢各位美言.



   
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欣欣
好文章,看得我跟你一起落泪。敬佩特蕾莎。



   
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欣欣好文!总觉得入世的努力比出世需要更多的勇气和毅力。

同意廖兄的意见,以第三段开文似乎更加干净利索。



   
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杜欣欣
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谢谢诗鸿,我会想想怎样改,主要考虑总要有些个人经验.

谢一毛.

一毛,你该做book tour了,觉得你好像有时间上网玩了.



   
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欣欣,能否推荐一本特蕾莎的传记?



   
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